Aide sur la forme de mon mail (en anglais) de demande spontanée de stage aux États-Unis

Bonjour à tous,Je suis un étudiant en médecine avec assez peu d'expérience à l'étranger mais j'ai réussi à obtenir le contact d'un prof d'une université américaine pour lui faire une demande de stage.Mais anglais n'est pas mauvais (du moins je pense) mais il n'est pas parfait et j'aurais aimé avoir un avis sur le fond comme sur la forme de mon mail... Si quelques avait la gentillesse de prendre le temps de lire mon mail (j'ai volontairement remplacé les noms pas des initiales) et de corriger le fautes ou me donner des conseils ce serait sympa.De manière générale si vous avez des conseils sur la manière de s'y prendre pour attirer l'attention d'un chercheur étranger pour obtenir un stage je suis preneur... J'ai réellement envie de pouvoir rajouter de l'expérience internationale sur mon CV que je trouve beaucoup trop ennuyeux....Merci d'avance !Dear Dr S.,
As a french medical student currently in third year and pursuing a master in medical biology, I am taking this opportunity to contact you to offer a spontaneous application as an intern in your laboratory. Your name was given to me by Dr M., head of a team of researcher working at IRSET, a French research institute in which I spend a few weeks last summer.
My academic credential in medicine and medical biology gives me the competence to be a productive and interesting member of a research team. I am of course familiar with the study of research articles and the common laboratory technics. Thanks to the diversity of summer jobs I worked on during the last few years (labs and hospitals of course but also slaughterhouse and factories) I am used to team work and hardworking. I also learned to be adaptable and sociable, thanks to my experience as a tutor in my university.
As a medicine student I have little free time during the year, that is why the internship I need for my master would need to take place during summer.
I already did a few internships, mainly in Rennes and Paris, however I still lack international experience in a foreign team. It would be a formidable opportunity to work in a prestigious university and improve my English at the same time.
You will find in my resume attached further information about my experience and my contact information. Should my spontaneous application draw your attention, I would be glad to answer any question you might have.
I thank you in advance for your consideration of my proposition.
Yours faithfully,
L.B.

Quelques suggestion:As a French medical student currently in third year and pursuing a master in medical biology, I am taking this opportunity to contact you to offer a spontaneous application as an intern in your laboratory. Your name was given to me by Dr M., head of a team of researcher working at IRSET, a French research institute in which I spend a few weeks last summer.
My academic credential in medicine and medical biology gives me the competence to be a productive and interesting member of a research team. I am of course familiar with the study of research articles and common laboratory technics. Thanks to the diversity of Summer jobs the last few years (labs, hospitals, etc.,) I am used to team work and hardworking. I also learned to be adaptable and sociable, thanks to my experience as a tutor in my university.
As a medicine student I have little free time during the year, that is why the internship I need for my master would need to take place during summer.
I already did a few internships, mainly in Rennes and Paris, however I still lack international experience in a foreign team. It would be a formidable opportunity to work in a prestigious university and improve my English at the same time.
You will find in my resume attached, with information about experience and contact information. Should my spontaneous application draw your attention, I would be glad to answer any question you might have.
I thank you in advance for your consideration of my proposition.
Yours faithfully,

Merci !

BonjourJuste pour info plusieurs jeunes qui avaient un stage aux USA ont été refoulés à la frontière à l'aéroport dont 2 français ! La police juge qu'il s'agit de travail déguisé ! Le dernier cas connu, un jeune français qui avait tout en ordre, a été mis en prison durant 16h sans aucune explication et ils ont fouillé son portable, ses papiers etc... il n'a même pas pu entrer en contact avec la société qui lui avait accordé un stage ! Il a été mis dans un avion et plus de possibilité de pouvoir retourner aux USA !
Donc attention où tu mets tes pieds, Trump & co cherchent vraiment la petite bête !LILI